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The bar chart shows the share of poverty of the rural areas in the years 1993 and 2002. The pie chart shows the rural area share and the urban area share of poverty in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the share of poverty of the rural areas in the years 1993 and 2002. The pie chart shows the rural area share and the urban area share of poverty in 2002. bXXl
The bar chart illustrates the the percent of the improverished population living in rural areas between 1993 and 2002. The pie chart gives the information of the difference between the rural and urbans areas in the sharing of poverty in the year 2002. For the bar chart, overall, East Asia and pacific had the highest percent among all of the other ones over the year. From 1993 and 2002, it didn't shows any increase or drops over the 9 years. The percent was around 90%, as opposed to Latin America and Caribbean, which was the least one as it shows a decrease from about 50% to 40%. For many areas, there isn't a sharp raises or drops over these years as the most of them, such as South Asia and Middle East and North Africa. They mentain almost stable, while the percent for Europe and Central Asia shows a growth about 15%. the pie chart shows more blue than the gray, which means thats the rural area share is much more than the Urban one(76% and 24% respectively).
The bar
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improverished
population living in rural
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between 1993 and 2002. The pie
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gives the information of the difference between the rural and
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urbans
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in the sharing of poverty in the
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year
2002.

For the bar
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,
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, East Asia and pacific had the highest
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among
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From 1993 and 2002
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any increase or drops over the 9 years. The
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was around 90%, as opposed to Latin America and Caribbean, which was the least one as it
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shows
a decrease from about 50% to 40%.

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, there isn't a sharp raises or drops over these years as the most of them, such as South Asia and Middle East and North Africa. They
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mentain
almost stable, while the
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for Europe and Central Asia
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shows
a growth about 15%.

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the
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the rural
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share is much more than the Urban one(76% and 24%
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the share of poverty of the rural areas in the years 1993 and 2002. The pie chart shows the rural area share and the urban area share of poverty in 2002.

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