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Percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity: 2010

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The chart illustrates the number of males and female
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did physical exercise in 2010 in Australia.
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men
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did regular activity were more in 15 to 24
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,
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,
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physical activity 52. 8% and
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47. 7% which were low by 5. 1%. In the age
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of 25 to 34, there were sudden drop in male population by 10%
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were dip to 39. 5% bout the prop ratio of
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ratio were
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rose to 43. 1% in the 45-54 For
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IELTS academic Percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity: 2010

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