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the table below shows the percentage of households and electric goods in New Zealand in 2002 and 2020

the table below shows the percentage of households and electric goods in New Zealand in 2002 and 2020 Mlewk

The table illustrate the proportion of various electric items that are used widely in New Zealand household between 2002 and 2020. Looking at the table, it is immediately obvious that the percentage of items is spend widely within 2020 than 2002. Washing machine always being as the essential electric goods; whereas, digital camera is less obtained by almost New Zealand family. At both years, washing machine and color TV always play an important role in almost family, that lead to the marginally increase from 97% to 98% and from 95% to 99% over the given period. Some less popular items such as cell phones and digital camera now being bought widely by New Zealand citizen which have the significant upward trend from 20% and 2% to 80% and 40% respectively. The computer in 2002 just take the half of usage in New Zealand family now climb up to 78% in 2020; otherwise, dishwasher seems increase marginally at only 10% over 18 years. On the other hands, video recorder become less popular over the given period, which proportion decrease dramatically from 75% to 60% in the last year.

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