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the table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave very good rating to the resources provided by college for three courses. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates data of how many students who had given good response towards that facilities which were provided by college for economics course law and commerce course. Pre- course information experienced the highest percentage in commerce course. Satisfaction of student from Pre- course information in law was 13% more than in economic course. On the other hand, Although, student had only 62% satisfaction from teaching in law, the percentage of satisfaction was increase considerably 80% from other resources. Print had been suspected 6% satisfaction than tutor. commerce experienced a decline in it's all resources from the student rate. Student had showed same satisfaction in the Pre-course information and teaching resource. It had the highest proportion in the other resource, which was 81%. Overall, there was a fluctuating trend in the rating by students. Commerce course was gotten high response from the students.
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IELTS academic the table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave very good rating to the resources provided by college for three courses.

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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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