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The table below shows the percentage government spent on education and training and the participation og 18-24 years old in education and training in five countries in 2002.

The table below shows the percentage government spent on education and training and the participation og 18-24 years old in education and training in five countries in 2002. Wy73K
The provided table illustrates the information about the proportion authority spent on education and training and the involvement of 18 to 24 year olds in the same in five nations: Poland, Crezch Republic, Romania, Slovenia in the year 2002. Overall, it is crystal clear that the government of Slovenia spent highest money on education and training, however the least money was spent by polish government. To begin with, the maximum money was spent by slovenia government, whereas in the same nation, the participation rate of 18-24 year olds was 40%. it is surprising fact that the government of polish spent least money on education and training, however the participation rate of people was highest than other countries. Moreover, almost static money was spent by the government of Crezch republic, and Romania. Further, 27% youth of Crezch republic was involved in this, which was 3%more as compared to Romania country. Lastly, the average money as well as participation was done by Hungary's authority.
The provided table illustrates the information about the proportion authority
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Republic, Romania, Slovenia in the year 2002.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage government spent on education and training and the participation og 18-24 years old in education and training in five countries in 2002.

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