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The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. MMVnp
The bar chart shows the current health expenditure totals as percentages of Gross Domestic Product(GDP) for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Different countries has different current health expenditure total percentages of GDP in different years. First of all, there are a few European countries have similar health expenditure percentages of GDP such as Belgium has 10%, Estonia has 5%, Spain has 8% and Switzerland has 11% for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Besides that, some of the countries health expenditure of GDP as percentages increases such as Denmark. Denmark has 9% of health expenditure as percentage of GDP in 2002 and 2007 and it increases to 10% in 2012. Lithuania, Norway, Poland and Slovenia has the same situation as Denmark which has the highest percentage of health expenditure of GDP in 2012 and has the similar percentage in 2002 and 2007. Other than that, the percentage of health expenditure of GDP in Luxembourg has 8% in 2002 and 2007 but in 2012 the percentage decreases until around 7%. Moreover, the health expenditure percentage of GDP in Netherlands decreases uniformly each 5 years. It has 10% of health expenditure of GDP in 2002 and 9% of it in 2007 and the last 6% of it in 2012. Lastly is France which has an unstable statistic which is it get 10% of health expenditure in 2002, 11% of it in 2007 and decreases to 9% in 2012. In conclusion different countries has different changes in health expenditure of GDP in each 5 years. Some of the European countries get stable statistic but some countries get an unstable statistic that it increase and the decreases in the further 5 years.
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2002, 2007 and 2012.
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5%, Spain has 8% and Switzerland has 11% for the years 2002, 2007 and

2012.
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of GDP in 2002 and 2007 and it increases to

10% in 2012. Lithuania, Norway, Poland and Slovenia has the same

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2007.

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Luxembourg has 8% in 2002 and 2007
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in 2012 the percentage

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GDP in Netherlands decreases
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10% of
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in 2002, 11% of it in 2007 and decreases to 9%

in 2012.

In conclusion
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an unstable statistic that it increase

and the decreases in the
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