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The line chart provides the data for fast food intake in six Europen countries

The line chart provides the data for fast food intake in six Europen countries OVk7j
The information is given in percent mrasurment for the past two decades togather with predicted patterns in 2040. Overall, in the majority of these countries, fast food is predicted to gain popularity among the population. However, only in the cases of Germany and Denmark, people are forecast to stert eating for less of it. The spanish figure for fast food intake is expected to see the steepest uptake throughout this period. it is tiny, 5% in 2000is foreseen to end the spain at about 35%. The italian and portuguese figure are also estimated to increase until relative 25% and 20% in the final year. The Dutch figure is forecast to increase slightly too. In stark contrast the fast food indecations in Denmark and Germany are foreseento see identically downturns. Their indications make up correlated 5% and roughly 1% in the diagram
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IELTS academic The line chart provides the data for fast food intake in six Europen countries

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