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The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before an the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods

The Provided tabulation explains how many number of viewers visited the AshdownMuseum previously and after the new transformation of the building. Furthermore, The Circular graphs illustrate the comments from the visitors in five different categories. Overall, The dramatic inclination over the count of visitors with 92, 000 after the Re-construction of the building with latest Amenities which is three times bigger thanthe previous years without any modifications. It is pellucid that the people are very satisfied after refurbishment with 40 per centby occupying one-more quarter rather than the olden times. Furthermore, There existsa marginal decrease over the possibility of attaining Extremely positive response is changed to 5 per cent from 35 per cent after completing the modification Activity. Further Point of Interest, The Non-Commentators are accounted by same constant value of 5 per cent, respectively among the two time periods.
The Provided tabulation
explains
how
many
number of viewers visited the
AshdownMuseum
previously and after the new transformation of the building.
Furthermore
, The Circular graphs illustrate the comments from the visitors in five
different
categories.

Overall
, The dramatic inclination over the count of visitors with 92, 000 after the Re-construction of the building with
latest
Amenities which is three times bigger
thanthe
previous years without any modifications.

It is pellucid that the
people
are
very
satisfied after refurbishment with 40 per
centby
occupying one-more quarter
rather
than the olden times.
Furthermore
, There
existsa
marginal decrease over the possibility of attaining
Extremely
positive
response is
changed
to 5 per cent from 35 per cent after completing the modification Activity.

Further
Point of Interest, The Non-Commentators
are accounted
by same constant value of 5 per cent,
respectively
among the two time periods.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before an the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods

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