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The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year and the year after it was refurbished. the charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with the visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year and the year after it was refurbished. the charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with the visit, during the same two periods. lb1J
The given table compares the number of visitors who went to the Ashdown Museum before and after its renovation. Additionally, the pie charts depict the level of satisfaction among the visitors on the same given years. Overall, it is clear that there were more number of visitors after the refurbishment of the museum and these visitors were satisfied in the later year rather than the dissatisfaction they faced before the redecoration. The table shows that the number of visitors visiting the Ashdown Museum increased significantly after they renovated it. The museum saw an increase in visitors by around 25 % as the number of tourists grew from 74, 000 before the refurbishment to 92, 000 after. The pie chart illustrates the increase in satisfaction among these visitors compared to the people who visited the museum before its refurbishment. The satisfaction among visitors grew by rapidly after the refurbishment from 45% of total satisfaction to 75%. There also was a significant amount of decrease in overall dissatisfaction as the survey revealed that 50% of visitors were initially dissatisfied by the museum compared to mere 20% after the renovation.
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to 92, 000 after.

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refurbishment
from 45% of total
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overall
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initially
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compared to mere 20% after the renovation.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year and the year after it was refurbished. the charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with the visit, during the same two periods.

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