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The graph show the change into islip small town

The graph show the change into islip small town XK3O
The picture illustrates the centre of countryside known as islip and create mew layout for its construction. Overall, it can apparently be seen that main changes in planned idea such as establisment of ring road with dual lane way, development of bus station and commercial area in future plane. From the feeling glance it os vivid that town side and shops area selected as construction for public infrastructure and industrial uses such as supermarkets. In east side shops choosen for appartments. However, main road converted into pedestrians zone and established car parking opposite to the new road. Probing ahead, the road from west side is constructed away from school and homes to connect with east side. Moreover, south side homes converted into street market and construct new residential area opposite to park
The picture illustrates the
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centre
of countryside known as
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islip
and create mew layout for its construction.

Overall
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apparently
be
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seen
that main
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changes
in planned
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idea
such as
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establisment
of ring road with dual lane way, development of bus station and commercial area in future
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plane
.

From the feeling glance it
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os
vivid that town side and shops area selected as construction for public infrastructure and industrial
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uses
such as supermarkets. In east side shops
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choosen
for
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appartments
.
However
, main road converted into pedestrians zone and established car parking opposite to the new road.

Probing ahead, the road from west side
is constructed
away from school and homes to connect with east side.
Moreover
, south side homes converted into street market and construct new residential area opposite to park
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IELTS academic The graph show the change into islip small town

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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