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The table below shows the number of tourists and their total spending in five countries from 2012 to 2013.

The table below shows the number of tourists and their total spending in five countries from 2012 to 2013. mX7Vd
The given tabular presentation illustrates the data about how many travelers visited to distinct kinds of nations and their total expenditure which was spent by them during 2012 and 2013. The units are measured in millions and billions. Overall, the highest number of tourists went to France, while the visitors spent a lot of money in the America from 2012 to 2013. According to the provided statistics, in both years (2012 and 2013), France was the favorite tourist attraction of individuals, but they allocated $53. 6 billion and $56. 1 billion respectively. Moreover, in the year of 2012, the number of bag packers was 66. 7 million and their spending was $126. 2 billion, whereas the number and the spending of people escalated to 69. 8 millions at $139. 6 billion. In 2012, the figure of travelers in Spain and China was same (almost 57 million), whilst the tourist who visited Spain used the most cash as compare to China in both given years. Furthermore, in Italy, before rising to 47. 7 million during 2013, the number of travelers dwindled considerably to 46. 4 billion in 2012 followed by in 2012, the tourist who went to Italy spent $41. 2 billion and it rose to $43. 9 billion in the next year.
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travelers visited to distinct kinds of nations and their total expenditure which
was spent
by them during 2012 and 2013. The units
are measured
in
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millions
and billions.

Overall
, the highest
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number
of
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tourists
went to France, while the visitors spent
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a lot of
money in the America from 2012 to 2013.

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tourist
attraction of individuals,
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but
they allocated $53. 6
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billion
and $56. 1
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billion
respectively
.
Moreover
, in the
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year
of 2012, the
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number
of bag packers was 66. 7
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million
and their spending was $126. 2
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billion
, whereas the
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number
and the spending of
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people
escalated to 69. 8
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millions
at $139. 6
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billion
. In 2012, the figure of travelers in Spain and China was same (almost 57
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million)
, whilst the
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tourist
who visited Spain
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used
the most cash as compare to China in both
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years.
Furthermore
, in Italy,
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rising to 47. 7
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million
during 2013, the
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of travelers dwindled
considerably
to 46. 4
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billion
in 2012 followed by in 2012, the
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tourist
who went to Italy spent $41. 2
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billion
and it rose to $43. 9
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billion
in the
next
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year
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IELTS academic The table below shows the number of tourists and their total spending in five countries from 2012 to 2013.

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