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describe how the illustrated two-wheeled bicycle below funcitions, and be sure to mention in your description

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The illustration shows the mechanics of the bicycle. Among the all-transportation tools bicycle is the most environmentally-friendly and economically beneficial than other transportation tools. The bicycle works with a simple principle by the force of the foot. Pedals move wheels. The person who uses the bicycle can control where s/he goes with the help of handlebars. The pedals are turning by the force of leg power. Following this pedal turn metal chain. Metal spokes which is the inside of the wheels are turned by the power which came from metal chain. Driver can increase speed by gear lever. The driver can reduce speed by the brake lever which is connected to the set of brakes. The cable connects them to each other. Also, the mechanism is got together by wheel hub and notched cog. Frame gets together the all systems
The illustration
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the mechanics of the
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bicycle
. Among the all-transportation tools
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bicycle
is the most
environmentally
-friendly and
economically
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beneficial
than other transportation tools.

The
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bicycle
works with a simple principle by the force of the foot. Pedals
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move
wheels. The person who
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uses
the
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bicycle
can control where s/he goes with the
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help
of handlebars.

The pedals are turning by the force of leg power. Following this pedal turn metal chain. Metal spokes which is the inside of the wheels
are turned
by the power which came from metal chain. Driver can increase speed by gear lever. The driver can
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reduce
speed by the brake lever which
is connected
to the set of brakes. The cable connects them to each other.
Also
, the mechanism is
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got
together by wheel hub and notched cog.

Frame
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gets
together the all systems

IELTS academic describe how the illustrated two-wheeled bicycle below funcitions, and be sure to mention in your description

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