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The given maps depict the alteration that took place in Tilden Airport and the surrounded area over the period of 30 years.Overall it is clear that most of the changes took place in the north side of the area. However, the area south of the airport also experienced greater urbanization.

The given maps depict the alteration that took place in Tilden Airport and the surrounded area over the period of 30 years. Overall it is clear that most of the changes took place in the north side of the area. However, the area south of the airport also experienced greater urbanization. n12LP
To begin with, north of the airport the Johnson farm was completely demolished and in there place the two runway and business park were established along with the building of house estate were also built in the north east of the corner. Moreover, by 2015, the domestic terminal were still remained same in the west of the area. However, the international terminal were extended in their size in the north west of the airport. Likewise, the car park area were also expanded in the south west. Moving forward, the airport support services had been replaced with bus and light rail station in 2015. Further development, where old factories were stood they were destroyed and there had been built light rail and airport support services. The hotel and conference center were constructed in the south east of the corner as well. The final development was the change of runway in the west Bank of the airport in 2105 there had been established one runway.
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with, north of the
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airport
the Johnson farm was completely demolished and in
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there
place the two runway and business park
were established
along with the building of
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house
estate were
also
built in the
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north east
of the corner.
Moreover
, by 2015, the domestic terminal were
still
remained same in the west of the area.
However
, the international terminal
were extended
in their size in the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
north west
of the
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airport
.
Likewise
, the car park area were
also
expanded in the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
south west
. Moving forward, the
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airport
support services had
been replaced
with bus and light rail station in 2015.
Further
development, where
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old
factories
were stood
they were
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destroyed
and there had
been built
light rail and
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airport
support services. The hotel and conference center
were constructed
in the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
south east
of the corner
as well
. The final development was the
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change
of runway in the
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west Bank
of the
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airport
in 2105 there had
been established
one runway.
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IELTS academic The given maps depict the alteration that took place in Tilden Airport and the surrounded area over the period of 30 years. Overall it is clear that most of the changes took place in the north side of the area. However, the area south of the airport also experienced greater urbanization.

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