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The two pie chart show the types of communication used in 1962 and in 1982.

The two pie chart show the types of communication used in 1962 and in 1982. AJ7G1
The two pie charts compare the different methods of keeping in tough in two seperate years 1962 and 1982. In general, while letter witnessed fall in the rate of inhabitants whereas this number of people using phones and computers underwent two upward trends It is immediately apparent from the pie that, at the beginning of the period, letter was the leader comunication with 50% people, accounted at a half of the total percentage. During the next twenty years, the number of residents fell significantly to 30% and it became the least preferred option in 1982. On the contrary, with only 35% initialy, the proportion of people used phone, with a view to staying in touch with others soared to peak at 60% and rank the most popular sector at the end of the period, this percentage bigger than letter and computeradded together. Likewise, in 1962 the rate of people tended to use computers saw a two fold rose and took the second place. In conclusion, there were changing patterns in popularity of using phones, letters and computers.
The two pie charts compare the
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methods of keeping in tough in two
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seperate
years 1962 and 1982.
In general
, while
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letter
witnessed fall in the rate of inhabitants whereas this number of
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people
using phones and computers underwent two upward trends

It is immediately apparent from the pie that, at the beginning of the period,
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letter
was the leader
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comunication
with 50%
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people
, accounted at a half of the total percentage. During the
next
twenty years, the number of residents fell
significantly
to 30% and it became the least preferred option in 1982.

On the contrary
, with
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only
35%
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initialy
, the proportion of
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people
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used
phone, with a view to staying in touch with others soared to peak at 60% and rank the most popular sector at the
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end
of the period, this percentage bigger than
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letter
and
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computeradded
together.
Likewise
, in 1962 the rate of
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people
tended to
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use
computers
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rose and took the second place.

In conclusion
, there were changing patterns in popularity of using phones,
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letters
and computers.
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