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The table below shows the number of babies born to New Zealand women over time.

The table below shows the number of babies born to New Zealand women over time. YkONQ

The given chart depicts the data about the percentage of infants birth in New Zealand from 1998 to 2013 between the age group of below fifteen to forty plus. Overall, the delivery of females in New Zealand was divided into 8 age groups that is, below fifteen years of age, another age groups are 15-19, 20-244, 25-29, 30-34, 35-39, 40-44 and at last 40+. From this table it was evident that age group between thirty to thirty nine had the higher rate of babies born to New Zealand womens. In 2008, the number of babies had a great increase when compared to other years. Among these 30 to 34 had the greatest growth rate(125. 9). The least babies per thousand women in Zealand was between the age group under 15 years in the year of 2013. Age group of 40-44 and 45 + had a slow but constant growth in each year. Below 15 years had comparatively less birth rate(below 1. 0) Age groups between 15-19 had a fluctuation in there percentage of infants born. Similarly, 20-24 also had the same situation.

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