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The table below shows the medical care in 3 different countries in the year between 1980 to 2000

The table below shows the medical care in 3 different countries in the year between 1980 to 2000 Blbbj

The table compares 3 different European nations in terms of medical treatment during the period from 1982 to 2000. To commence with, there was an increasing trend in the physicians provided in Austria and Sweden over three decades, from 0. 8 to 1. 0 and 3. 6 to 3. 0 each. While the opposite trend was witnessed in France from 2. 4 to 1. 3. In addition to this, the number of beds in the hospital in Sweden was equal in 1980 and 1990 at 6. 4 and increased slightly in 2000 at 6. 9. Moreover, in France and Sweden, the number of beds increased gradually from 1. 4 to 3. 7 and 0. 2 to 1. 6 respectively. Turning to the length of stay in the hospital, Sweden, which accounted for the longest 23 days in 1980, also saw the most significant fall to only 18 days in 1990. Although the figures for Austria and France experienced the same trend, both 2 countries shrank less compared to Sweden. Overall, in terms of the doctors provided and hospital beds, there was an upward trend during the whole period, while the opposite trend was witnessed in the amount of time staying in the hospital.

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 European nations in terms of medical treatment during the period from 1982 to 2000.

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 in the physicians provided in Austria and Sweden over three decades, from 0. 8 to 1. 0 and 3. 6 to 3. 0 each. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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was witnessed
 in France from 2. 4 to 1. 3.

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 in Sweden was equal in 1980 and 1990 at 6. 4 and increased slightly
 in 2000 at 6. 9. Moreover
, in France and Sweden, the number of beds increased gradually
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.

Turning to the length of stay in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
, Sweden, which accounted for the longest 23 days in 1980, also
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 18 days in 1990. Although the figures for Austria and France experienced the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdirectiontendencymovement
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, both 2 countries shrank less compared to Sweden.

Overall
, in terms of the doctors provided and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
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 beds, there was an upward You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdirectiontendencymovement
trend
 during the whole period, while the opposite You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdirectiontendencymovement
trend
was witnessed
 in the amount of time staying in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
. 