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The table below shows the income and jobs generated last year by tourism in Canadian states and territories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given table provide figures of the tourism generated income and tourism generated jobs in last year. Firstly, the highest tourism generated income territory is Ontario and the lowest tourism generated jobs province is Prince Edward Island and its number is only 2866 jobs and the highest income is $59797 million. Newfoundland tourism generated income figure is $316 million and tourism generated 8136 jobs. Secondly, $5357 million income by tourism in Quebec and tourism generated 130, 018 jobs in Quebec. Thirdly, Alberta and British Columbia tourism generated income is similar because Alberta generated income is $3, 063 million and British Columbia generated income is $4, 913 million. The highest tourism generated jobs territory is Ontario and its number of jobs is 226, 781 last year. Lastly, total tourism generated income in last year is $76, 102 million and number of jobs is 606, 527. In conclusion, Canadian last year tourism generated highest jobs and income in Ontario state.
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territory is Ontario and the lowest
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province is Prince Edward Island and its number is
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is $59797
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. Newfoundland
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figure is $316
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8136
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in Quebec and
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130, 018
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, Alberta and British Columbia
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Alberta
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is $3, 063
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and British Columbia
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is $4, 913
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. The highest
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territory is Ontario and its number of
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is 226, 781 last year.
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, total
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in last year is $76, 102
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and number of
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is 606, 527.

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in Ontario state.
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