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The purpose of the map shows the site of an airport and now and how it will look after redevelopment in the next year.

The purpose of the map shows the site of an airport and now and how it will look after redevelopment in the next year. G9e7o
The given maps depict the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment in the next year. Overall, tremendous change took places during the given time period. Few buildings will newly built in future. It can be clearly seen that in departure area, there is a check-in in the left side. In the east side, there is a cafe. In the front of departure area, here it is security passport control and in the arrivals area, there is only a passport control customs. At the end of airport, there are 8 gates and between the building here it's a walking way. Moving for the rest of the details, security passport and passport control customs will remained stable. In departures area, check-in will be moved to opposite side. Bag drop will be newly built in the west side. The cafe will be shifted and near the entrance. Shops will be introduced between the security passport control and gates. In the arrival area, cafe, ATM and car hire will be constructed in the east side. Gated area will be doubled by 10. In the place of walkway will be replaced by sky train and both sides of entrance will be doubled.
The
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maps depict the site of an airport
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now
and how it will look after redevelopment in the
next
year.

Overall
, tremendous
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change
took places during the
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given
time period. Few buildings will
newly
built
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in future
.

It can be
clearly
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seen
that in departure
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area
, there is a
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check
-in in the
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left
side. In the east side, there is a
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cafe
. In the front of departure
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area
, here it is security
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passport
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control
and in the
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arrivals
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area
, there is
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only
a
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passport
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control
customs. At the
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end
of airport, there are 8 gates and between the building here it's a walking way.

Moving for the rest of the
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details
, security
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passport
and
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passport
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control
customs will remained stable. In departures
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area
,
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check
-in will be
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moved
to opposite side. Bag drop will be
newly
built in the west side. The
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cafe
will
be shifted
and near the entrance. Shops will
be introduced
between the security
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passport
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control
and gates. In the arrival
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area
,
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cafe
, ATM and car hire will
be constructed
in the east side. Gated
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area
will
be doubled
by 10. In the place of walkway will
be replaced
by sky train and both
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sides
of entrance will
be doubled
.

IELTS academic The purpose of the map shows the site of an airport and now and how it will look after redevelopment in the next year.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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