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report of a new cafeteria

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Introduction This report outlines and describe the current situation in the cafeteria of the college and which changes could be made to improve this facility. Location Although the cafeteria is located in the hall of the college, it is rarely crowded by students. Currently, in the same place there are too many services, such as library, reception area and info point. All of those facilities create disorganization and people don't have the possibility of enjoying a break. Prices A common complaint are also prices. Students and teachers think that some dishes are overpriced. Furthermore, the lack of a facilitated pricing policy for employees doesn't help. Furniture The ambient is pretty old-fashioned, seats and table are old and basic. There is nowhere to sit comfortably and enjoy a meal with friends or colleagues. Suggestions To sum up, from all of the above points, it is clear that many changes should be made, ranging from a better location to a revision of prices and furniture.

Introduction

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changes
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improve
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Location

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Furniture

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 and basic. There is nowhere to sit comfortably
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Suggestions

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changes
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