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The table below shows the expenses per week of a retired single person and a couple in Australia, for their comfortable lifestyle

The table below shows the expenses per week of a retired single person and a couple in Australia, for their comfortable lifestyle 5q0Q
The given table compares the weekly expenditure of retired single person with that of a retired couple in Australia. It is manifest from the graph that the couples have to spend more than a single person on all the things, but the biggest difference is in housing and clothing. The total weekly expenses needed by a single retired person are $650, whereas a retired couple spends $934 weekly for a comfortable lifestyle. Out of this, the maximum goes into housing and other miscellaneous expenditures by both categories of retirees. 9160 and $284 are spent on housing by single and couple retirees respectively, whereas g177 and $223 are devoted weekly to other things. A singie retired person spends 964, fi92, $67, $55 and $35 on health, shelter, clothing, food and shopping respectively, whereas a couple has to spend moderately more (g27, $110, $120, $70 and 950) on these things. overall, the least expenditure is incurred on shopping and food by the retired people and the maximum on housing and other things.
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table compares the
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expenditure of
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retired
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single
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person
with that of a

retired
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couple
in Australia. It is manifest from the graph that the
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couples
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more than a
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single
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person
on all the things,
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the biggest difference is in housing and

clothing.

The total
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weekly
expenses needed by a
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single
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retired
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person
are $650, whereas a retired

couple spends $934
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weekly
for a comfortable lifestyle. Out of this, the
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maximum


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goes


into housing and other miscellaneous expenditures by both categories of retirees.

9160

and $284
are spent
on housing by
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single
and
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couple
retirees
respectively
, whereas g177

and $223
are devoted
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weekly
to other things.

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singie
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retired
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person
spends 964, fi92, $67, $55 and $35 on health, shelter, clothing,

food and shopping
respectively
, whereas a
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couple
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has to
spend
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more (g27,

$110, $120, $70 and 950) on these things.

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overall
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retired
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people


and the maximum on housing and other things.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the expenses per week of a retired single person and a couple in Australia, for their comfortable lifestyle

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170 words
5.5
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