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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1 The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built. k90W
The diagram demonstrates the process of building a teepee There are eight steps to this process, beginning with making a tripod and ending with fix the bottoms of the canvas to the ground First, three same heights sticks are tied by a rope. Secondly, a tripod is formed by raise the sticks by pulling the end of the rope. Then, more sticks are added to the tripod. Next, the end of the rope is wrapped around all the stick. Thirdly, a canvas is wrapped arounf another stick. Then, the stick is lifted agains the tripod stucture and the canvas is unwrapped onto the teepee. Then, the end of the canvas is pinned together using metal pins. Finally, the bottom of the canvas is pinned to the ground to make sure the canvas is ready
The diagram demonstrates the process of building a
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teepee


There are eight steps to this process, beginning with making a tripod and ending with
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fix
the bottoms of the
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canvas
to the ground

First
, three same heights
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sticks
are tied
by a rope.
Secondly
, a tripod
is formed
by raise the
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sticks
by pulling the
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end
of the rope. Then, more
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sticks
are
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added
to the tripod.
Next
, the
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end
of the rope
is wrapped
around all the
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stick
.
Thirdly
, a
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canvas
is wrapped
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arounf
another stick.

Then, the
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stick
is lifted
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agains
the tripod
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stucture
and the
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canvas
is unwrapped
onto the
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teepee
. Then, the
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end
of the
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canvas
is pinned
together using metal pins.
Finally
, the bottom of the
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canvas
is pinned
to the ground to
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make
sure the
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canvas
is ready

IELTS academic WRITING TASK 1 The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
133 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.