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The table below shows the cost of water in five cities in Australia in 2004.

The table below shows the cost of water in five cities in Australia in 2004. qgdr
The table demonstrates the cost of water in five cities in Australia in 2004. Although they are Australia cities, the price of these have differences. The cheapest usage charge per kiloliter(up to 125 kls) is Adelaide and perth. They just cost $0. 42 per kiloliter. Compared with them, Sydney’s usage charge per kiloliter (up to 125 kls) required $0. 98 which twice more than adelaide’s and perth’s. Meanwhile, the usage charge in Brisbane was $0. 84 per kiloliter and Melbourne was $0. 78 per kiloliter(up to 125 kls). If you use too much water which is over 125 kls in perth or Adelaide, you have to pay more. For example, the usage charge of perth is the most, you spend $1. 5 per kiloliter. And the usage charge of Adelaide is $1 per kiloliter when you use water over 125 kiloliter. Compared with that, Brisbane, Melbourne and Sydney cost the same per kiloliter as you use lower than 125. Per household in perth cost the the most averagely. It was about $332. However, the average water bill in Melbourne cost the least about $253 per household. The average water bill in Adelaide, Brisbane and Sydney are $312, $310 and $319 per household. Sometimes companies use different water prices which depend on how much you use that will cost more than expect but also encourage people to save water.
The table demonstrates the
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in five cities in Australia in 2004. Although they are Australia cities, the price of these have differences.

The cheapest
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per kiloliter(up to 125
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kls
) is Adelaide and
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perth
. They
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cost
$0. 42 per kiloliter. Compared with them, Sydney’s
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usage
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per kiloliter (up to 125
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kls
) required $0. 98 which twice more than
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adelaide
’s and
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perth
’s. Meanwhile, the
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in Brisbane was $0. 84 per kiloliter and Melbourne was $0. 78 per kiloliter(up to 125
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kls
). If you
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too much
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water
which is over 125
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kls
in
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perth
or Adelaide, you
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, the
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the most, you spend $1. 5 per kiloliter. And the
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of Adelaide is $1 per kiloliter when you
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over 125
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. Compared with that, Brisbane, Melbourne and Sydney
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the same per kiloliter as you
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lower than 125. Per household in
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perth
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most
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bill in Melbourne
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the least about $253 per household. The average
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bill in Adelaide, Brisbane and Sydney are $312, $310 and $319 per household.

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prices which depend on how much you
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that will
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more than
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IELTS academic The table below shows the cost of water in five cities in Australia in 2004.

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