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the two maps show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

the two maps show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 RJep

The two maps illustrate the innovation of road enter to a hospital in the city from 2007 to 2010. From a general perspective, the maps indicate several visible changes. These alternations of the road from 2007 to 2010 occur in the following features: bus stops, car park for staff and public. Firstly, to the east, there was an emergence of the public car park next to the city hospital in 2010. In contrast, the car park in 2007 used for both staff and public was changed for only staff in 2010. In addition, the demolition of six bus stops along two sides of hospital road in 2007 made room for the construction of the bus station opposite to staff car park in 2010. Furthermore, there were two roundabouts constructed in 2010. One located on the middle map, connected to the bus station and city hospital, while another built in the south between the bus station and city road.

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hospital
 in the city from 2007 to 2010.

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changes
. These alternations of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 from 2007 to 2010 occur in the following features: bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
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park
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforcepersonnelteamwork forcecrewcadre
staff
 and public.

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car
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park
next
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hospital
 in 2010. In contrast
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car
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park
 in 2007 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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staff
 and public was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
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staff
 in 2010. In addition
, the demolition of six bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
 along two sides of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
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road
 in 2007 made room for the construction of the bus station opposite to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforcepersonnelteamwork forcecrewcadre
staff
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car
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park
 in 2010.

Furthermore
, there were two roundabouts constructed in 2010. One located on the middle map, connected to the bus station and city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
, while another built in the south between the bus station and city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
. 