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The diagram below shows the percentage of share of total world production of wheat by Asia, Europe and other part of the world from the years 1840 to 2000.

The diagram below shows the percentage of share of total world production of wheat by Asia, Europe and other part of the world from the years 1840 to 2000. omdB

The given bar chart illustrates the portion of Asia, Europe and the rest of the world wheat production in whole world between 1840 and 2000, measured in percentage. Overall, it is immediately apparent that despite some fluctuations, wheat production in Asia and Europe decreased while the rest of the world experienced significant growth over the period. Looking at the changes within first 80 years, Asia which was about 10% higher than proportion of Europe and five times more than percentage of the rest of the earth produced half of total wheat in 1840. Also, by 1880, the percentage of the entire wheat supply in Asia halved and continued to decline to 20% by 1920. In contrast, the respective figures for Europe and the rest of the earth jumped gradually to 50% and 30%. Turning to the changed rates in the next 80 years, Asia's share of production rise significantly twice from 1960 to 2000 while Europe reversed nearly and stood at 40% and tiny over 25% respectively. However, portion of the rest of the earth fluctuated slightly and finally became roughly 34%.

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rest
 of the world You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrasscereal
wheat
 production in whole world between 1840 and 2000, measured in percentage.

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some
 fluctuations, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrasscereal
wheat
 production in Asia and Europe decreased while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvacation
rest
 of the world experienced significant growth over the period.

Looking at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
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 80 years, Asia which was about 10% higher than proportion of Europe and five times more than percentage of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvacation
rest
 of the earth produced half of total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrasscereal
wheat
 in 1840. Also
, by 1880, the percentage of the entire You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrasscereal
wheat
 supply in Asia halved and continued to decline to 20% by 1920. In contrast
, the respective figures for Europe and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvacation
rest
 of the earth jumped gradually
 to 50% and 30%.

Turning to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 rates in the next
 80 years, Asia's share of production rise significantly
 twice from 1960 to 2000 while Europe reversed nearly
 and stood at 40% and tiny over 25% respectively
. However
, portion of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvacation
rest
 of the earth fluctuated slightly
 and finally
 became roughly 34%. 