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The table below shows the changel in exports in hk billions between 2009 and 2010.

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The information regarding the exchanges in export in hk billions from 2009 to 2010 depicted by table chart. At a fleeting glance most highlighting feature of graffiti is that the highest equipment was export in 2009 as compared to others. movinga to details, telecommunications and clothing were exports 7. 9 and 6$hk billion in 2009 respectively. Additional, manufacturing was export 5. 5 $ hk billion in 2009 but it was dropped to 4 $ hk billion in 2010. Moreover, metals was export was 2. 3 $ hk billion in 2009 however it was increased to 5. 1 $hk billion. Additionally in, 2009 equipment you metals were export in Hong Kong between 4 to 12. 7 $hje billion in 2010. Overall, it can be clearly seen that minimum metals was export in first year rather than other years.
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export
in 2009 as compared to others.
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7. 9 and
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6$
hk
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respectively
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5.
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5 $
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in 2009
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in Hong Kong
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