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The bar graph below outline literacy rate for a number of nations in 2004

The bar graph below outline literacy rate for a number of nations in 2004 5673m
It is evident from the graph that most of the countries or over 80% literacy rateLooking more closely e Georgia and solvakia had 100% literacy rate. While this trend start to fell slightly for next countries, is Israel ranked the third most literate, with roughly 97% literacy rate. People of Colombia, Mexico and, Indonesia showed almost same percentage of literacy with almost 95%. Where as qater, Brazil, Peru and Turkey were literate by almost over four fifth. Literacy in Syria in 2004 was slightly lower at 80%. While Tunisha and Columbia followed the same trend for literacy with 77%. Looking at next three countries, which had the lowest literacy rates where haiti, Pakistan and Sierra Leone with 61%, 50%, and 30% correspondingly.
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