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The bar charts illustrate the number of paper production of Karnaphuli paper mills Ltd and Bashundhara paper mills Ltd in the year between 2011 and 2015. The measured is in millions.

The bar charts illustrate the number of paper production of Karnaphuli paper mills Ltd and Bashundhara paper mills Ltd in the year between 2011 and 2015. The measured is in millions. OVjPd
The bar charts illustrate the number of paper production of Karnaphuli paper mills Ltd and Bashundhara paper mills Ltd in the year between 2011 and 2015. The measured is in millions. It is clear that the highest proportion of paper Production was Bashundhara paper mills Ltd in 2015. By contrast, Karnaphuli paper mills Ltd receive the least number of productions throughout the same year. In 2011, the number of paper produced From Karnaphuli paper mills Ltd was 45 million tons and this figure decreased slightly to 35 million tons in 2012. While, Bashundhara paper mills Ltd Produce 20 million tons in 2011, it rose to 25 million tons in 2012. On the other hand, the differences between Karnaphuli and Bashundhara's annual paper production rate was not much higher in 2013. Between 2012 and 2015, the number of paper production from Bashundhara growth rapidly from 45 million tons to 55million tons, a rise of 10 million tons, however, there was a lose of 8 million tons paper production From Karnaphuli paper mills Ltd.
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