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The table below shows some data regarding Australia's nursing employment and total workforce in 1987 and 2001.

The table below shows some data regarding Australia's nursing employment and total workforce in 1987 and 2001. The table below shows some data regarding Australia's nursing employment and total workforce in 1987 and 2001. The table below shows some data regarding Australia's nursing employment and total workforce in 1987 and 2001. The table below shows some data regarding Australia's nursing employment and total workforce in 1987 and 2001.
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in 1987 and 2001. The
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regarding Australia's nursing
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IELTS academic The table below shows some data regarding Australia's nursing employment and total workforce in 1987 and 2001.

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