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The graphs below compare the average weekly earnings of male and female graduates and non-graduates.

The bar chart shows the comparison for average weekly earnings of both genders who have academic degree and non academic degree. The overall trend of the chart is their is an increase in weekly earnings to both graduated and non-graduated men over their ages, while there is decline in weekly earnings to both graduated and non-graduated women over their ages Firstly, the graduated men from age of '16-19' to '40-49' has a sharp rise in weekly earnings of about 0 to 720 Pounds. Then from last two bars(age of 40-49 to 50- 59) of graduated men is that their is slight growth in weekly earnings of about 720 to 750 Pounds. Secondly, the non-graduated men from age of '16-19' to '40-49' has steady increase in weekly earnings of about 210 to 590 pounds, whereas from last two bars of non-graduated men (40-49 and 50-59) their is stable in weekly earnings of about 590 pounds. Thirdly, the graduated women from age of '16-19' to '25. 29' their is sharp increase in weekly earnings of about 0 to 420 pounds. After then from age of '25-29' to '50-59' their is slight decline with fluctuation in weekly earnings of about 420 to 400 pounds. Finally, the non-graduated women from '16-19' to '25-29' their is a steady growth in weekly earnings of about 210 to 340 pounds. Then their is gradual decrease in weekly earnings of about 340 to 290 pounds over age from '25-29' to '50-59'. The overall trends is that men earnings are more than women earnings per week. Moreover, graduated men from age 50-59 earns highest among the others per week.
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over their ages

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of '16-19' to '40-49' has a sharp rise in
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of about 0 to 720 Pounds. Then from last two bars(age of 40-49 to
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50- 59
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50-59 earns highest among the others per week.

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