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The pie charts and table give information about the total value and source of fish imported to the United States between 1988 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts and table provide data related to accumulated expenditure and fish purchased by the United States from China, Canada and other countries between 1988 and 2000 Overall, most of the earnings utilised in buying fish was in 2000 and least of it was employed in 1988. Maximum and minimum of it was purchased in 1988 itself. To commence with, minimum cost incurred on fish purchase, which was in 1988, has been recorded as $6. 57 billions. Consequently, increased to 8. 52 billions of dollars in 1992, followed by an increase of approximately 2. 5 billions dollars in 2000. Probing further, continuous decline of 32 percent in the fish imported from Canada within 1988 and 2000 was witnessed. Whereas, gradual rise in the import from China, which experienced increase of nearly 17 percent, was recorded. However, purchase from other countries showed a massive increase from 27 to 46 percent followed by downfall of 2 percent in 2000.
The pie charts and table provide data related to accumulated expenditure and fish
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purchased
by the United States from China, Canada and other countries between 1988 and 2000

Overall
, most of the earnings
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utilised
in buying fish was in 2000 and least of it
was employed
in 1988. Maximum and minimum of it was
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purchased
in 1988 itself.

To commence with, minimum cost incurred on fish
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purchase
, which was in 1988, has
been recorded
as $6. 57 billions.
Consequently
, increased to 8.
Use a singular form of the numeral here: “52 billion”.
52 billions of
dollars in 1992, followed by an increase of approximately 2. 5 billions dollars in 2000.

Probing
further
, continuous decline of 32
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percent
in the fish imported from Canada within 1988 and 2000
was witnessed
. Whereas, gradual rise in the import from China, which experienced increase of
nearly
17
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percent
,
was recorded
.
However
,
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purchase
from other countries
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showed
a massive increase from 27 to 46
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percent
followed by downfall of 2
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percent
in 2000.
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IELTS academic The pie charts and table give information about the total value and source of fish imported to the United States between 1988 and 2000.

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