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The chart below shows the value of one country'sexports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.

The chart below shows the value of one country'sexports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. gkOl
The table shows the comparison of percentage change in values in different categories of exports (Petroleum products, engineered goods, Gems and jewellery, agricultural products and textiles) in 2015 with 2016. The bar chart illustrates the value of a country's exports among different categories over the given period. Units are measured in billions dollars. Overall, the value of petroleum products exported in 2016 outnumbered those of other categories, While both the agricultural products and textiles are relatively the same with the least values. Although, the export of fuel products in 2015 was marginally different from that of 2016, the textile industry grew substantially well. Apart from these, there were some country's goods gradually went up in exports such as engineering goods rising from $58 billions to $64 billions roughly, alongside agricultural products climbed from $30 billions to $32 billions approximately at 0. 81% increase, Meanwhile the gems and jewellery goods exported by the country drastically dropped in 2016 at the rate of 5. 18% from $45 billions to $40 billions around.
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the comparison of percentage
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change
in values in
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different
categories of
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exports
(Petroleum
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products
, engineered 
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goods
, Gems and
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jewellery
, agricultural
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products
and textiles) in 2015 with 2016. The bar chart illustrates the
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value
of a country's
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exports
among
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different
categories over the
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given
period. Units
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billions
dollars.

Overall
, the
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value
of petroleum
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products
exported in 2016 outnumbered those of other categories, While both the agricultural
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products
and textiles are
relatively
the same with the least values. Although, the
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export
of fuel
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products
in 2015 was
marginally
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different
from that of 2016, the textile industry grew
substantially
well.

Apart from these, there were
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some
country's
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goods
gradually
went up in
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exports
such as engineering
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goods
rising from $58
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billions
to $64
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roughly, alongside agricultural
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products
climbed from $30
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billions
to $32
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billions
approximately at 0. 81% increase, Meanwhile the gems and
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jewellery
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goods
exported by the country
drastically
dropped in 2016 at the rate of 5. 18% from $45
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billions
to $40
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billions
around.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country'sexports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.

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