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The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014.

The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. JorA6
The table shows the local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years from 2004 to 2014. Different years have different number of local catches and imports of fresh fish. First, local catches of fresh fish in Perth increases from 2004 to 2008 and decreases until 2012 and it started to increases until 2014. In 2004 the tons of local catches is 2677. 7 metric tons. While in 2008 the tons of local catches has the highest tons which is 8136. 2 metric tons. In 2009 the tons of local catches decrease to 7844. 9 metric tons. It decrease steadily until 4271. 3 metric tons in 2012. Then, the tons of local catches increases to 5031. 9 metric tons in 2014. Besides that, the imports of fresh fish has a different changes of statistic from 2004 to 2014. The tons of imports of fresh fish decreases from 2004 to 2005 and started to increase until 2012 and it started to decrease until 2014. In 2004 its imports fresh fish has 464. 5 metric tons and it decreases to 231. 6 metric tons in 2005. After that, it started to increase in 2006 which has 309. 9 metric tons of imports fresh fish and it increases unsteadily until 2012 which has the highest tons of imports fresh fish from 2004 to 2014. It started to decrease from 2013 and in 2014 the imports of fresh fish is 782. 7 metric tons. Lastly, the total of local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth increases speedily from 2004 which is 3142. 2 metric tons to 2009 which gets the highest total number which is 8949 metric tons. It started to decreases from 2010 which has 8035. 1 metric tons until 2014 which has the total number of local catches and imports of fresh fish, 5814. 7 metric tons. In conclusions, different years will get a different total number of fresh fish into Perth from 2004 to 2014 because of the climate change will affect the fishing business every year.
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