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The most common played sports in new Zealand in 2002

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the above chart demonstrates the varieties of the proportion among boys and girls who played different sports in New Zealand in 2002. Overall, it is clear that the percentage of boys playing sports is higher than this figure for girls except for athletics, netball and swimming. However, the biggest proportion gap belongs to netball. While the rate of girls who played netball accounted for at around 25%, only 1% of girls playing cricket. Athletics and swimming were also the two major sports for girls, had the proportion of below 5% and at about 22%, respectively. Approximately 6% of girls playing basketball and this figure for tennis was 7%. Only 10% of girls played the other sports. The majority of boys played soccer and criket, at below 25% and 10% respectively. On the other hand athletics and netball were not so common while these figures only accounted for above 3% and 1% respectively. By contrast, these percentage for tennis and basketball were pretty similar, at around 7%. The other sports were played only by 15% of boys in 200
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sports in New Zealand in 2002.

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playing sports is higher

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netball accounted for at around 25%,
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playing cricket. Athletics and swimming were
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playing basketball and this figure for tennis was

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the other sports.

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common while these figures

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for tennis and basketball were pretty similar, at around 7%.

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