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The table below shows information the contribution of Various Economic Sectors to Xcountry Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017 and 2018

The table below shows information the contribution of Various Economic Sectors to Xcountry Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017 and 2018 x2w2Q
The table provides data about three types of Economics Sectors to Xcountry Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017 and 2018. The table compares between an Agriculture, an Industry and a Service sectors in terms of three years. Over the next three years, the percentages of Service decreased slightly, however, the end of period it was on the highest point. Furthemore, opposite of this procces was with Agriculture. In 2016, the contribution of Industry and Service were 22% and 65%. Afterwards, Industry rate increased sharply to 25% in 2017. In the meantime, the percentage of Service decreased by 1%. Finally, the Service sector drop down again to 55% in 2018. But, in this year the conrtibution of Industry rose just under by 5% and took second place in GDP. In early 2016, the contribution of Agriculture was 13%. Then, there was a negligibe fall to 11%. In the end of period it rose marginally to 15%
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Xcountry
Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017 and 2018. The table compares between an Agriculture, an
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Industry
and a
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Service
sectors in terms of three years. Over the
next
three years, the percentages of
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Service
decreased
slightly
,
however
, the
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end
of period it was on the highest point.
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Furthemore
, opposite of this
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procces
was with Agriculture. In 2016, the contribution of
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Industry
and
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Service
were 22% and 65%. Afterwards,
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Industry
rate increased
sharply
to 25% in 2017. In the meantime, the percentage of
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Service
decreased by 1%.
Finally
, the
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sector
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drop down
again to 55% in 2018.
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, in this year the
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conrtibution
of
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Industry
rose
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under by 5% and took second place in GDP. In early 2016, the contribution of Agriculture was 13%. Then, there was a
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negligibe
fall to 11%. In the
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end
of period it rose
marginally
to 15%
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