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The chart illustrates information regarding how humans aged 25to34 are housed in the UK.

The chart illustrates information regarding how humans aged 25to34 are housed in the UK. QVq2K
In general, it is vivid from the bar chart that home owners had the haighest percentage in 2004 to 2008. As well as, Renters had the lowest number in between 2004 to 2008. Looking at the more details, when it comes to Home owners index started at 59%. In particular, in 2004 to 2008 include to at the identical result. On top of that, Home owners compare at the last year 36% approximately. By contrast, as regardsRenters how people aged 25 to 34 are housed in the UK started at twenty percent in 2004. At this point, in the last year stand at renters had the highest number 48 percentage. Last but not least, Renters this year during becoming increased.
In general
, it is vivid from the bar chart that
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home owners
had the
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haighest
percentage in 2004 to 2008.
As well
as, Renters had the lowest number in
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between 2004 to 2008
. Looking at the more
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details
, when it
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comes
to Home owners index
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started
at 59%.
In particular
, in 2004 to 2008 include to at the identical result.
On top of that
, Home owners compare at the last year 36% approximately. By contrast, as
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regardsRenters
how
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people
aged 25 to 34
are housed
in the UK
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started
at twenty percent in 2004. At this point, in the last year stand at renters had the highest number 48 percentage. Last
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but
not least, Renters this year during becoming increased.
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IELTS academic The chart illustrates information regarding how humans aged 25to34 are housed in the UK.

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120 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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