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The chart illustrates information regarding how humans aged 25to34 are housed in the UK.

The chart illustrates information regarding how humans aged 25to34 are housed in the UK. QVq2K

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IELTS academic The chart illustrates information regarding how humans aged 25to34 are housed in the UK.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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