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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. xonw
In today's society computers are playing an imperative role in our lives. However, whether it necessary or not has caused alots of debate among people. Some people claim that electronic brains are significant phenomenon, which makes the life of student and educators being more easy and interestingful. Whereas others argue that this is main reason for being addicted to technologies. On the one hand a number of researches demonstrate the result that laptops help to increase the process of obtaining knowledge in order not to mess up tables with unwanted stuff. Other than this, the symbol of modern century. This actively illustrates that, either students and lecturers desire to work in co-operation with computers and as a result laptops are being popular in sphere of education. That's why, personal computers are reckoned by many educational centres like insitutes, colleges and schools that they have a profound effect in the life of society. On the other hand, people who like paper-based materials choice are inclined to touch the point of view that hardly do computers positivly effect to individuals. Apart from this majority doctors try to decrease screens the reason for encountering with health problems. Therefore elucidating the impression that, politicians also say that instead of computers, government should channel budget to improving standarts in education facilities. Unless, people speak up issues which are computers replace books, authority will contine ignoring. To sum up everything that has been stated so far, In my opinion without computers education system will be bothersome and less effective, simultaneosly. Consequently, popularity of education will declining. So, we should reconsider wheather they need or not but modern society demand being used computers in all fields.
In
today
's society computers are playing an imperative role in our
lives
.
However
, whether
it
necessary or not has caused
alots
of debate among
people
.
Some
people
claim that electronic brains are significant phenomenon, which
makes
the life of student and educators being more easy and
interestingful
. Whereas others argue that this is main reason for
being addicted
to technologies. On the one hand a number of researches demonstrate the result that laptops
help
to increase the process of obtaining knowledge in order not to mess up tables with unwanted stuff. Other than this, the symbol of modern century. This
actively
illustrates that, either students and lecturers desire to work in co-operation with computers and
as a result
laptops are being popular in sphere of
education
. That's why, personal computers
are reckoned
by
many
educational
centres
like
insitutes
, colleges and schools that they have a profound effect in the life of society.
On the other hand
,
people
who like paper-based materials choice
are inclined
to touch the point of view that hardly do computers
positivly
effect to individuals. Apart from this majority doctors try to decrease screens the reason for encountering with health problems.
Therefore
elucidating the impression that, politicians
also
say that
instead
of computers,
government
should channel budget to improving
standarts
in
education
facilities. Unless,
people
speak up issues which are computers replace books, authority will
contine
ignoring. To sum up everything that has
been stated
so
far, In my opinion without computers
education
system will be bothersome and less effective,
simultaneosly
.
Consequently
, popularity of
education
will
declining
.
So
, we should reconsider
wheather
they need or not
but
modern society demand being
used
computers in all fields.
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IELTS academic Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.

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