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The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. X1jE
The line graphs depict information regarding the births and deaths per thousand people in New Zealand from the year 1901 and project the rates till the year 2101. Overall, both birth and death rates have increased over the time period. The death rate has increased consistently and is expected to drop slightly towards 2101. Meanwhile, the birthrate has fluctuated but declined steadily since 1991. New Zealand recorded 20 births per 1000 in 1901. The rate fluctuated but increased steadily, reaching its peak of almost 70 births in the 1960s. The birth rate fluctuated by declining to 50 in 1981 before climbing to 60 towards 2001. Thereafter the rate steadily declined and is projected to decline to 45 births by 2101. The death rate in New Zealand has maintained an increasing trend overall. In the beginning, there were only 8. This rate fluctuated but rose steadily to 23 deaths per thousand in 2001. It is projected to rise steadily to 35 in 2021 and is projected to reach its peak of 59 in 2061 and is projected to fall to 56 in 2101.
The line graphs depict information regarding the
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births
and deaths per thousand
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people
in New Zealand from the year 1901 and project the
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rates
till the year 2101.

Overall
, both
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birth
and death
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rates
have increased over the time period. The death
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rate
has increased
consistently
and is
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expected
to drop
slightly
towards 2101. Meanwhile, the birthrate has
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fluctuated
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but
declined
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steadily
since 1991.

New Zealand recorded 20
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births
per 1000 in 1901. The
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rate
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fluctuated
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but
increased
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steadily
, reaching its peak of almost 70
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births
in the 1960s. The
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birth
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rate
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fluctuated
by declining to 50 in 1981
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before
climbing to 60 towards 2001.
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Thereafter
the
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rate
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steadily
declined and is
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projected
to decline to 45
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births
by 2101.

The death
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rate
in New Zealand has maintained an increasing trend
overall
. In the beginning, there were
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8. This
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rate
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fluctuated
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but
rose
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steadily
to 23 deaths per thousand in 2001. It is
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projected
to rise
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steadily
to 35 in 2021 and is
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to reach its peak of 59 in 2061 and is
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to fall to 56 in 2101.
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.

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