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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. 0LX5
The given pictures demonstrate information about how forecast data is collected and analyzed by Australian Bureau of Meteorology to support public by lastest wheather informations. There are four stages in the process from collecting to broadcasting to the public. The first step is the datas about wheather are collected by 3 different types of sources namely satellites are offered satellite photos while radar using radar screen and synoptic charts are taken from drifting buoy. Once all infomation has been collected, the information is the loaded onto a computer for preparing the broadcast. After that, the news are broadcasted in different local media sources like televison, radio and telephones. Final stages are regarding the weather is informed to the public via TV news, radio broadcasting and as a recorded anmouncement in gadgets like phones.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

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