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The bar chart below shows about the average children born per woman in 5 countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart below shows about the average children born per woman in 5 countries in 1970 and 2000. 7qY2

A glance at the bar chart provided illustrates data regarding medium amount of childbirth in India, Thailand, Mexico, Spain and Somalia during the period 1970 and 2000. Overall, a cursory glance at the graph is abundance to make it clear that at the beginning of the period India had the highest birth rate by per woman, at the end of the period Somalia takes the lead in child birth rate. Looking at the 1970, the number of birth, in India and Thailand, was around 5 children. Notwithstanding, in Mexico, Spain and Somalia, there were almost 3 children respectively. Turning to the next year, Indian and Thai woman gave birth average 3 and less than 2 accordingly. Also, In Spain average less than 3 children were born of a woman and it showed the lowest rate among five countries. However, Somalia had the highest quantity of childbirths per woman (about 3, 6). One noticeable point is that the birth rate of Mexico remained constant.

A glance at the bar chart provided illustrates data regarding medium amount of childbirth in India, Thailand, Mexico, Spain and Somalia during the period 1970 and 2000.

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