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the table below shows information about attendance at cultural events in UK in 3-year period.

the table below shows information about attendance at cultural events in UK in 3-year period. m8ODN

The depicted graph compares data on attendance rate in the six different types of cultural activities in the country of Great Britain in three-year time. Looking from an overall, it is apparent that over the supplied points cinemas and theaters are the leaders whereas opera and ballet ones are demonstrating the least ones. As the chart highlights, cinemas and theatres demonstrate the highest portions in all given three years. The former one depicts 33 in first year, then 47 in fifth year at the end 49 in tenth year. The latter one provides table with 20, 24 and 26 in turn according to years. By contrast, art galleries showed some variation based on the time, with 11, 13 then 6. Classical music and concerts saw a decrease, at 10, 7 and 5 respectively. Interestingly ballet and opera witnessed the least one, with six, two, eight and five, seven, six in turn.

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 ballet and opera witnessed the least one, with six, two, eight and five, seven, six in turn. 