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The table below shows information about age, avarege income per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA

The table below shows information about age, avarege income per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA XnG2w
The table data illustrates the age, average income every person and people below poverty line in three states of USA. In general, the table is devided into two ages and formed the various percentages in three states of US, moreover the table data depicts avarage income and the percentages of population below poverty line. Firstly we can give attention to contrast the proportion of three states. In California the number of people who was aged under 18 were constitute 17%, on the contrary the statistics of population aged over 60 formed 13%. As well as the number of average income of public made up $23, 000 per person, moreover the percentage of population below poverty line equal to 16% in California state. In another state named Utah the statistics depicts the various kind of percentages and money in avarege income in this table data. In this state the percentage of people aged under 18 10% more than other states, however the people aged over 60 formed 8% and this is lowest percentage in this table, and the avarage income made up $17, 000. It can be seen that the lowest avarage income formed in UTAH state. In addition the percentage of population below poverty line formed less statistics than other state, it comprised almost a tenth. The third state named Florida depicts the people aged under18 made up a tenth less than the percentage of Utah state. In addition the percentage of people aged over 60 similar to that, namely one in ten per cent over than the statistics of California state, and the avarage income 1% over than the statistics of California state in this state. Finally the percentage of population below poverty line 3% over than the numbers of Utah state. As a result California state dominated in two steps, and other two states dominated only in one steps in this table data.
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equal to 16% in California
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named Utah the
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IELTS academic The table below shows information about age, avarege income per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA

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