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The maps reveal the changes in the village of Ryemouth from 1995 to date.

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The maps reveal the changes in the village of Ryemouth from 1995 to date. Overall, the village of Ryemouth had farmland, forest, and seaside for fishing in 1995. During the time period, the village has been completely transformed with lots of change. As one of the most spectacular changes, the farmland in north-east and the forest park in the south of it have been totally cut-down, and golf and tennis areas have been built. The cafe in the seaside hasn’t been changed, but the hotel across the road has a new car park after the period. Shop in roadside has been replaced with a restaurant. The increase in the number of houses in the village also attracts attention. A new road and new houses have been constructed in the north-west. In addition, the fish market in the seaside has been replaced with apartments and the fishing port in front of the fish market has also been demolished.
The maps reveal the
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in the
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Ryemouth
from 1995 to date.

Overall
, the
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Ryemouth
had farmland, forest, and seaside for fishing in 1995. During the time period, the
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village
has been completely transformed with lots of
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change
.

As one of the most spectacular
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changes
, the farmland in north-east and the forest park in the south of it have been
totally
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cut
-down, and golf and tennis areas have
been built
. The
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cafe
in the seaside hasn’t been
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the hotel across the road has a new car park after the period. Shop in roadside has
been replaced
with a restaurant.

The increase in the number of
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houses
in the
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village
also
attracts attention. A new road and new
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houses
have
been constructed
in the north-west.
In addition
, the fish market in the seaside has
been replaced
with apartments and the fishing port in front of the fish market has
also
been demolished
.
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