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The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows how the people, who are unemployed, spend their time from last year in UK. The description contains four types, by dividing the day with morning and afternoon and dividing people by their gender. In general, men in the morning are doing job-hunting according to the table. At the same time period, women are doing housework. In the afternoon, women with high per cent are watching TV and men are occupying by doing housework. According to the chart; drinking, playing a sport, visiting town has the lowest number. Men compared to women more likely to drink in the morning and afternoon. Also, eight per cent of both men and women staying in their bad in the morning. The highest difference in the table is that women are more likely to do the housework in the morning and afternoon compare to men. Gardening is an activity that chooses to do in the morning for men. In addition, women prefer to gardening in the afternoon.
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people
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are unemployed
, spend their time from last year in UK. The description contains four types, by dividing the day with
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morning
and afternoon and dividing
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people
by their gender.

In general
,
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men
in the
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morning
are doing job-hunting according to the table. At the same time period,
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women
are doing housework. In the afternoon,
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women
with high per cent are watching TV and
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men
are occupying by doing housework.

According to the chart; drinking, playing a sport, visiting town has the lowest number.
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Men
compared to
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women
more likely to drink in the
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morning
and afternoon.
Also
, eight per cent of both
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men
and
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women
staying in their
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bad
in the morning.

The highest difference in the table is that
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women
are more likely to do the housework in the
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morning
and afternoon compare to
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men
. Gardening is an activity that chooses to do in the
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morning
for
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men
.
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,
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prefer to
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gardening
in the afternoon.

IELTS academic The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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