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The line graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compares the outflow of carbon dioxide in four countries in decades from 1967 to 2007. It is measured in metric tonnes. Overall, it is clear that Portugal and Italy were increased while United Kingdom and Sweden was decreased over a period shown. In 1967, Italy and Portugal were stood at just above four and just below two tonnes respectively. Then, Italy increased sharply and reached at just over six in 1977, whilst Portugal increased steadily and reached at in between two and four metric tonnes, in 1987. Before remained static at the end of the period with just under eight, Italy rose gradually till 1997. After increased steadily from 1987 to 1997, Portugal increased minimally and reached at just below six tonnes. In 1967, United Kingdom and Sweden were stood at marginally above eight and ten metric tonnes respectively. Before decreased dramatically, Sweden increased sharply, and reached at peak in 1977, around ten metric tonnes. Then, in 1987, it decreased steadily again and got equal to Italy by the end of the period at around six. However, United Kingdom decreased steadily over a period.
The line graph compares the outflow of carbon dioxide in four countries in decades from 1967 to 2007. It
is measured
in metric tonnes.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that Portugal and Italy were
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increased
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while United Kingdom
and Sweden was
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decreased
over a
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period
shown.

In 1967, Italy and Portugal
were stood
at
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just
above four and
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just
below two tonnes
respectively
. Then, Italy
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increased
sharply
and
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reached
at
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just
over six in 1977, whilst Portugal
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increased
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steadily
and
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reached
at in between two and four metric tonnes, in 1987.
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Before
remained static at the
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end
of the
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period
with
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just
under eight, Italy rose
gradually
till 1997. After
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increased
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steadily
from 1987 to 1997, Portugal
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increased
minimally
and
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reached
at
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just
below six tonnes.

In 1967, United Kingdom and Sweden
were stood
at
marginally
above eight and ten metric tonnes
respectively
.
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Before
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decreased
dramatically
, Sweden
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increased
sharply
, and
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reached
at peak in 1977, around ten metric tonnes. Then, in 1987, it
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decreased
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steadily
again and
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got
equal to Italy by the
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end
of the
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period
at around six.
However
, United Kingdom
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decreased
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steadily
over a
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period
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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