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The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. 5Mmn
The table informs multiple activities of jobless people choosing during a day in the UK. It shows that most women spent a great time of their morning and afternoon doing chores rather than men. According to the list, men and women conducted possibly 14 preferable activities both in the morning and afternoon. However, women generally found themselves starting their day with 5 top activities mostly. These activities were housework of 49%, shopping of 26%, job hunting of 16%, or staying in bed 8%. In the afternoon, the preferable list switched to doing housework declined to 21%, shopping 17%, visiting friends or relatives up to 17%, job hunting down to 13%, either reading or watching TV 12% and 10% respectively. For men, the list was quite distinct from what women picked in the morning, most men who were unemployed had a higher rate to find a job of 22%, shopping of 20%, finishing housework of 19%, or gardening by 14%. Whilst, they spent their time in the afternoon to watch TV out of 14% than other things. The following activities were also being picked, such as gardening just decrease to 13%, meeting friends or relatives doubled to 12%, shopping dropped to 6%, or even doing nothing merely sitting around at 9%.
The table informs multiple
activities
of jobless
people
choosing during a day in the UK. It
shows
that most
women
spent a great time of their morning and afternoon doing chores
rather
than
men
.

According to the list,
men
and
women
conducted
possibly
14 preferable
activities
both in the morning and afternoon.
However
,
women
generally
found themselves starting their day with 5 top
activities
mostly
. These
activities
were housework of 49%,
shopping
of 26%, job hunting of 16%, or staying in bed 8%. In the afternoon, the preferable list switched to doing housework declined to 21%,
shopping
17%, visiting friends or relatives up to 17%, job hunting down to 13%, either reading or watching TV 12% and 10%
respectively
.

For
men
, the list was quite distinct from what
women
picked in the morning, most
men
who
were unemployed
had a higher rate to find a job of 22%,
shopping
of 20%, finishing housework of 19%, or gardening by 14%. Whilst, they spent their time in the afternoon to
watch
TV out of 14% than other things. The following
activities
were
also
being picked
, such as gardening
just
decrease to 13%, meeting friends or relatives doubled to 12%,
shopping
dropped to 6%, or even doing nothing
merely
sitting around at 9%.
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IELTS academic The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
210 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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