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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. 8R7m
The chart illustrates the number of enquiries by the Tourist Tnformation Office in one city from January to June. These showing the pacticular feature way to reach the customer. Generally, on the growing trend is directly communication which is in person and by telephone. At first, in person flow is inreasing monthly from 400 to over 1800. Seconly, by telephone trend is peaking in the beginning and inclining until June. In the other hand, reaching customer through letter and email is decline from below 800 to almost 400 in six months duration.
The chart illustrates the number of
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enquiries
by the Tourist
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Tnformation
Office in one city from January to June. These showing the
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pacticular
feature way to reach the customer.

Generally
, on the growing trend is
directly
communication which is in person and by telephone. At
first
, in person flow is
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inreasing
monthly from 400 to over 1800.
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Seconly
, by telephone trend is peaking in the beginning and inclining until June.

In the other hand, reaching customer through letter and email is decline from below 800 to almost 400 in six months duration.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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