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the table below shows expenditure of four car companies

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the table shows illustrates a comparative study regarding four car companies advertising in the year 2000 in UK in millions of dollars. Overall, the Cetirizine company is highest spent the money on the advertising for tv. In contrast, the Rover company is lowest spent on the money on the commercial for Outdoor. also these four car company is spent the money on advertisment on radio that is same. the renault company that highest money spent on the pitch for tv, cinema and outdoor that is 59$, 6$ and 7$ are respectively. on other hand the Rover company spent the money on advertising for tv that is same to the renault spent on press that are same 45$. rover company are expend on advertisment for press and Outdoor that is 45$, 2$ are severally in the given orders. also Both company are give the money on advertisement for radio are also same price that is 15$. In case of Vauxhall, It is spent the money on advertisment for tv that is 65$. Compare to the Vauxhall, the Cetirizine is highest spent on tv that is 70$. The cetirizine is expend on advertising for press that is 12$. in other hand, Vauxhall is expend on press that is 8$ only. Vauxhall is expend on commercial for Cinema and Outdoor that is corresponding to the 5$ and 7$. In case of Cetirizine expend on the Outdoor is only 3$.
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illustrates a comparative study regarding four car
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companies
advertising in the year 2000 in UK in millions of dollars.

Overall
, the
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Cetirizine
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company
is highest
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spent
the
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money
on the advertising for
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tv
.
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, the Rover
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company
is lowest
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spent
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money
on the commercial for
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Outdoor
.
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also
these four car
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company
is
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spent
the
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money
on
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advertisment
on radio
that is
same.

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the
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renault
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company
that highest
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money
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spent
on the pitch for
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tv
, cinema and
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outdoor
that is
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59$
,
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6$
and
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7$
are
respectively
.
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on
other hand the Rover
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company
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spent
the
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money
on advertising for
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tv
that is
same to the
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renault
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spent
on
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press
that are same
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45$
.
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rover
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company
are
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expend
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advertisment
for
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press
and
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Outdoor
that is
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45$
,
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2$
are
severally
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also
Both
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company
are give the
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money
on advertisement for radio are
also
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that is
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15$
.

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Vauxhall
, It is
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spent
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money
on
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advertisment
for
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tv
that is
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65$
. Compare to the
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Vauxhall
, the
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Cetirizine
is highest
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spent
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tv
that is
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70$
. The
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cetirizine
is
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press
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12$
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in
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Vauxhall
is
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press
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8$
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only
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Vauxhall
is
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expend
on commercial for Cinema and
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Outdoor
that is
corresponding to the
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5$
and
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7$
. In case of
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Cetirizine
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expend
on the
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Outdoor
is
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only
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3$
.
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