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The provided table illustrates the result of a survey conducted in a European nation regarding the preference of varied tv programs watched by various age groups in 2012. Data is measured in the percentage. Overall, it is clear from the chart that people's preference of watching sports was almost same among the all age groups while, least proportion of cartoons was watched by the 21-25 age group. As can be seen that people from the age group of 11-15, gave highest 29% preference to the cartoons programs followed by the sports. Moreover, approximately same proportion shared by the feature films and soap opera, 18% and 17% respectively. However, only 6% preference devoted to the news. With regards the age group 16-20, almost similar proportion (18%) of cartoons, news and sports were watched by this group. Their largest proportion of preference (23%) was accounted for feature films. Furthermore, age group of 21-25 shared their interest toward news(23%). The respective figures for the feature films and soap opera were 20% and 19%.
The provided table illustrates the result of a survey conducted in a European nation regarding the
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age
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groups
in 2012. Data
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clear
from the chart that
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people
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of watching sports was almost same among the all
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age
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groups
while,
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least
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proportion
of cartoons was
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watched
by the 21-25
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age
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seen
that
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people
from the
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age
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group
of 11-15, gave highest 29%
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preference
to the cartoons programs followed by the sports.
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, approximately same
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proportion
shared by the feature films and soap opera, 18% and 17%
respectively
.
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,
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only
6%
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preference
devoted to the news.

With regards the
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age
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16-20, almost similar
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proportion
(18%) of cartoons, news and sports were
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group
. Their largest
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(23%)
was accounted
for feature films.
Furthermore
,
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age
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of 21-25 shared their interest toward news(23%). The respective figures for the feature films and soap opera were 20% and 19%.
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IELTS academic The table below shows a survey on the preference of different age g

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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