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The given diagrams shows the map of road access to city hospital in 2007 and 2010

The given diagrams shows the map of road access to city hospital in 2007 and 2010 Qwp6b

The given two diagrams are the Mabs representing the road access to city hospital in two different years namely 2007 and 2010. It can be clearly seen from the first map that in 2007, city hospital is there in the north which is surrounded by a single road known as ‘Ring Road. ’This Ring Road is further connected to city Road by Hospital Road in the south moreover, there were six bus stops three on each side of the hospital road.

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given
 two diagrams are the Possible spelling mistake found.MassMapsMarsLabsMatsMays
Mabs
 representing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 access to city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
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different
 years namely
 2007 and 2010. It can be clearly
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seen
 from the first
 map that in 2007, city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 is there in the north which is surrounded
 by a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 known as ‘Ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
. ’This Ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
 is further
 connected to city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
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Road
 in the south moreover
, there were six Possible agreement error. The noun 'bus' seems to be countable, so consider using: "buses", "busses".busesbusses
bus
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stops
 three on each side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
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road
. 