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The line graph illustrates the information about several inquiries to visitor information office done by telephone/letters and in individuals between January 2001 and June 2001. The data has been given in numbers.

The line graph illustrates the information about several inquiries to visitor information office done by telephone/letters and in individuals between January 2001 and June 2001. The data has been given in numbers. PMN5E

Overall, it can be vividly manifested that the highest number of inquiries made by human beings. Whereas, opposite trend followed by others. In details, in January inquires done by mankind's nearly 600. While, minor Decline seen by emails information. Which was approximately 500 till March month. Whilst, , a large rose observed in people inquiries. There had been 800 until March. Moving ahead, in April the investigations done by letters that was dramatically decline and stopped at on 250. But, in may which inquiries made by folks it was a increase dramatically and, reached on closely 1000 till the end of June. Also, a large went down comprised in that field which inquiries made by letters. There were two hundred in June. Moving further, eighth hundred inquiries done by mobile in January then some fluctuation was seen which was continued at the match. Afterward, it approximately remained equal in may month, and at the end of period a minor increase comprised in that inquiries which was done by phones there was barely 850 in June month.

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